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Post by Donzle on 7/16/2012, 11:36 pm

Character Name:Donzle
Age:35
Gender:Male
Race:Saiyan
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Starting Location:Planet Vegeta

Biography:Donzle came out of an old noble family among the saiyans. While no longer what it once was, it was still a respected family for it smart,tatical fighters that came out of it. Donzle was expected from his elders to be the best of the best, even for saiyan standerds. Due to his high birth to most, He was taken care by his mother,Torla while his father worked as a saiyan commander to king vegeta. As soon as he became of age, his father began to train him every day from dawn to dusk to the brink of death. Donzle almost died mutiple times while in training as he was given much harsher but effective. He became an effective saiyan who was compared to Prince Vegeta but to many he wouldn't be good enough to take down a saiyan prince. At fifteen Donzle offically joined the saiyan army and was drafted to the Tilus group who was tasked with with he called "leaving nothing but the puddle of death in the after wake" on the planet Polakis IV. Donzle being a saiyan himself didn't bother with his new fond comrades as they were saiyans. The entire Tilus group was filled with saiyans who just joined the army so they wern't fond of him either. On the trip there on a small ship carrying pods, the saiyans kept to themselves though Donzle began talking to a female saiyan named Tosha. The two ranked up quite a sarcastic conversation which led to a arm wrestling match. Donzle wasn't exactly fond of the results but the two became quick friends. They were the only two that actually talked on the ride there. When they arrived at Polakis IV, the only thing they all agreed to do was to drop in from orbit and as soon as they hit the ground, destroy,pillage and murder everything. Donzle didn't like the idea of killing who couldn't fight but he wouldn't complain. They got into there pods and prepared for the worse but Donzle wasn't what you call a regular saiyan. He kept his cool and waited for the drop into low orbit. Donzle trained mutiple times with drop pods so to him, a human child could do it.Without warning the pods droped into low orbit and quickly caught on fire as they all riped through low orbit and the atmosphere.Donzle had his arms crossed while he looked up information on Polakis IV on his scouter.The falling was bothering him at all, he just ignored for the time being. Within minutes however there firery pods of death finally crashed into craters. After hearing those small explosions, who wouldn't checked it out?

It wouldn't take long for a crowd of people to sprung up around the sites. If only they knew what was going to happen to them. It wouldn't take long for a blood bath to occur. Donzle heard the bodies drop before his door to his pod even opened. When he entered the world he was to destroy, everything looked barrened already. Tosha screamed at Donzle as she flew away "Idiot! What are you doing!" . Donzle looked away and ignored it as he begun his death spree. He walked down a street and prepared himself to launch a red wave of death.Donzle brough his hands behind his back and began to gather ki. He did for a moment before finally he enough ki. Quickly he brought his palms of his hands forward, unleashing a huge red wave. The red wave shot down the street,vaporizing any people in the way as well riping through buildings until it finally stopped and caused a large explosion a few city blocks away. For a quick moment Donzle smirked, to him this was going to be quite fun indeed as he watched the remaining people flee and scream for there pitiful lives. For fiftheen days by himself he walked the surface of this world and helped burn everything to the ground. There was one day however and it was raining hard, Donzle had taken a breather laying agianst some ruins of a building he destroyed. He heard moans and screams for the people running or trying to hide. It would mean nothing in the end for them. He looked around, almost the entire city had been destroyed by him alone. His comrades most likey left the city in his hands as they were scattered around the planet. He didn't bother to contact them as there was no serious threats. Most of there fighters had a power level of 200 at the most and with there people using old guns they sealed there fight almost worse as the truffles. Donzle took a heavy wif of air in and breathing it out before getting back on his feet and begun walking towards an non destroyed block of buildings.

At the block, he made little work of the buildings with it's residents in a matter of only minutes. He stumbled apon the last building and was prepared to fire a Ki wave at the building when he heard some crying. For some reason he doesn't know even to this day, he investigated the crying. He approanched the building, walking up the stairs and destroying the door without effort. He began walking down a hall way untill three men showed up and began firing there weapons. Donzle blocked there attack with right palm of his hand before sending the three men to there death with a Ki ball. It wasn't long before he found what was the crying but it wasn't what he was expecting. In the doorway of a small and dark room he found a beautiful woman who crying. This sight ultimately stunned him for a time but she layed there, knowing she would die if she tried to run. Though it was a sight to see Donzle would shake out of it and do something he didn't think he ever do. Without thinking, He merciless raped and impregnated the poor woman however he wasn't done with her just yet. He seemed to like this women so he descided to keep her as a prize of sorts. He knocked her out after raping her and took her to his pod and locked it after he put the pod in a mode to do Suspended animination on her to keep her alive but leave her unconscious for the time Donzle would need to destroy everything on the planet.

Afterwards he assumed his killing spree for another fiftheen days, killing and destroying all in his path. He enjoyed his time on Polakis IV. Eventually almost everything on the planet was destroyed however Donzle comrade's discovered a last safe heaven to the people on the planet. They fortifed a gigantic fortress with large cannons. While his comrades could take it out themselves, he wanted the entire group there to make the bloodshed go smoother.At dusk Donzle flew to the outskirts of the fortress and met his comrades including Tosha. They would have another sarcastic conversation as usual before the group came up with a plan to assault the fortress. Donzle and Tosha would flank the fortress from the rear as the rest of the team would distract the main cannons. Before the plan could be put into motion Nightfall came, with it a bright full moon. Wasn't long at all before they all turned into great apes and merciless slaughtered everyone, causing the fortress to be nothing more then a bloody death trap. With this cleared, everything was destroyed and dead. They returned home and reacived there pay. It was noted Donzle was dragged to a bar with his comrades and Tosha even though they never bothered to connect with each other. After arriving home,Donzle in secret brought the the woman from Polakis IV and there unborn child and putted her a cryo tank to be cryonically frozen until he would require her services. For the next fiftheen years, he would collect a single beautiful women of every species that looked closely to saiyan or human he encoutered during many missions for the Planet trade organization. He became known as the Species Collecter to the public on planet vegata and was forced by King vegeta eventually to create a museum to exhibit them. Donzle never really firgured it out though why the king did that since the saiyans cared little for knowledge.

While he hated the thought of saiyans basically being slaves to the Planet trade organization and doing there dirty work, he didn't hesitate to take missions to kill and slaughter. He completed many missions with Tosha and gain much renown, especially after killing the traitoris and heretic saiyan, Korne who was one of King Vegeta's most powerful elites. While Donzle was nearly killed in the long and bloody battle with Korne, he proved to be the better fighter after firing a massive Ki wave at korne after Tosha distracted him. Donzle had broken both his arms and ran out of Ki completely after firing such a massive Ki wave and passed out after firing it. After the battle Tosha brought Donzle to a hospital where doctors putted him into a rejuvenation chamber and study his vitals until Donzle wakes hours later fully rejuvenated and ready again for more action. After he recovered completely he was brought to King Vegeta where he was made as one of his elite's. At first Donzle didn't like the idea of being a body guard for a saiyan but after some time passed, he grew to like it, especially after it titled him to almost anything he wanted and gave him quite the perks with the ladies. Him being an elite now didn't stop him from going on missions as King Vegeta often had him shipped out. He didn't usually stop Donzle from bringing Tosha with him due to there "special connection" they had. They eventually blossomed into a romantic relationship with marriage soon after Donzle once agian became mortally wounded after being hit in the chest by a Ki beam. The near thought of Donzle dying drove her to the edge and as a result gain Florence Nightingale syndrome after she took him to the hospital again. This time however Donzle took four times longer to be completely rejuvenated. After Donzle recovered again she confessed her love for him. Donzle being a warrior and saiyan second denied her love at first which broke Tosha's heart but later made up for it when he propsed and married her. Tosha was soon Pregnant with Donzle's child after having "a wild night". Donzle's new power didn't go undetected though. King Vegeta knew about his new power and had ordered Donzle to fight his own son in a sparring battle for all to watch to see who is the stronger saiyan. To the saiyans it was a major event as many saiyan had gathered at the arena, even Lord Frieza had poked somewhat of an interest in it. King Vegeta and Donzle's mother came to watch as they sat in high society spots. The sparr match started but quickly turned into a full scale battle as each other would attack each constatly and fire there best attacks each other with each attack being ferrous then the last. This would be Donzle's greatest battle to date. Eventually the two warriors knocked each other out of the arena after there Ki wave attacks created a large explosion. Mortally wounded, the two were taken to the hospital where they fully recovered but not before they paid respects to each other. King Vegeta expected great things from both of them and while Donzle failed his expections, King Vegeta considered him more then a worthy warrior and was promoted to be a saiyan commander in the army.

With this new position, He became leader of the Noble House Tibeis as his mother became too old and battle weary to continue leading the house. It wouldn't matter as Torla died shortly after Tosha gave birth to there daughter, Asuma. Even as a saiyan Donzle took his mother's death rather hard as he felt she was one of the very few to ever really care for him. Donzle never cared much for his father even if he trained him to fight. He alway's put his saiyan blood first before his family. After a few year's with Earth more publicly known to the saiyan population, King Vegeta sent Donzle to earth to invesigate some powerful fighters that were for reason a threat. King Vegeta was right when Donzle was attacked by these fighters and destroyed his pod, leaving him stranded after left planet vegeta and landed on earth. He managed to hold himself however one saiyan moderly wounded him and left him for dead. He was eventually found by a travaler and taken to a hospital where it took Donzle months to fully recover. Since Donzle was stuck on this back water planet he figured he tried to blend in or understand how things worked on this planet instead of blowing everything up or risk being stuck on earth forever. He eventually came across these warriors when they found him alive and acting normal instead of killing everything in sight and blowing up everything for a normal saiyan warrior. Most of them wanted to kill Donzle on the spot although the same saiyan that fought Donzle and wounded tried some conversation with him. It wasn't hard as Donzle talked. The two understood each other or at least respected each other enough not to blast each other in the face with Ki ball. Although Donzle wasn't fond of the kid in the way he put it, the saiyan eventually grew on him as Donzle wasn't going anywhere. This eventually led to the saiyan using his remarkable intuition at seeing the good in within Donzle to attempt at making Donzle a better person. Donzle eventually had a change of heart when he saved a young fasion model named, Lilith and a number of other people from a burning studio building. After that the saiyan led him to Bulma who after some hard conversations led her to start constructing a ship for him to get off world. In the meantime for a year, Donzle stayed in the east and well had some interesting fun while evading Lilith who had a unbreakable crush on him. This crush drove Donzle insane as no matter where he hide, she find him somehow. Donzle would be releaved after Bulma finally finished the ship for him using some remains from his ship. Donzle thanked Bulma and said his farwells to the people he met before leaving. It would take Donzle a week to get home due to it having some assault pod technicology in it.

On the trip home, Donzle descided to train for the week using the gravity chamber in the ship. It was quite effective as it was challenging and effective though Donzle would become lightly wounded with some large cuts and bruises. When he finally touched down on planet vegeta again, he was given a hero's welcome as they had taged his ship as soon as it entered the system. It wasn't the greeting he was expecting but of course he liked it, who wouldn't? when he saw Tosha and Asuma he hugged them like he never did before. He holded Asauma and looked at her, Asuma was seven now compared to before where she small and defenseless. He took his wife hands and embraced her for a moment before looking at both of them. For once in his life, he actually felt true joy and happiness. Something rare in the saiyan race. As soon as he got back into motion as a Saiyan Commander and leader of House Tibeis, he realized what he wanted to do now, he wanted to take over the throne and bring a golden age to the saiyans and unite the people of earth without conflict. While Donzle would work very hard towards his new objctives, To stay in line with King vegeta, He'd still go on mission with his troops to led them in battle even if it was agianst his persona now. He was no longer the same saiyan that was born here long ago......................

personality:Donzle personality is much different and at the sam time the same as the usual saiyan. It's normal for Donzle to be negative and looked like he's pissed off. On the outside he is very defensive towards new people or people he doesn't know. People who do not know him have to put much effort to break through to the real him although many give up. He tends to be very sarcastic and cocky appears to be a ass most of the times. He hate being told something twice. he become's very annoyed with people who are rational and act on stupid things. He isn't very social and tends to keep to himself and be a loner.With his personality in this form, he keeps his feeling to himself and often does not express them. He is very mature and tends to take thing's very seriously. He has a very dry sense of humor. On the inside, he is a friendly and very warmloving to the people he know's and love. While he doesn't show pubically often, he is very romantic and passionate towards his wife and express them often. He is extremely friendly towards friends and comrades and will often go out of his way to help them when needed.As with his other personality, he is still a bit sarcastic and cocky but on a small scale and still has a very dry sense of humor. Being a saiyan and living on planet Vegeta, he sometime gives in to his former self where he'll have a usual saiyan personality although it's quite uncommon.

Attributes:
Strength:100
Agility:50
Ki:100
Endurance:150
Abilities:Kamehameha

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Roleplay SampleDonzle wasn't sure of what the hell Just happened. First his Ki wave was deflected by what looked like a simple scrap of metal..That same scrap of metal had fallen off of an assault pod when he was thrown into it after he was cought...Second he hoped that at least his high kick would get through and do some damage, but at anvail and when the scrap of metal was dropped, A dark shadow that the took form of a man appeared and had manifested a large, needle like tail out of his body.

This guy certainly grew in power than Donzle would expect from a mutant freak. He could make Bio weapons out of his body. Not exactly a power he would pride in. It was ough to be sick in certain ways that would even make saiyan sick to the stomash. Donzle couldn't really figure out why he only made a tail. Donzle knew he use to asorb people to gain power quickly but it...it was sick. A saiyan prefered to get blown up mutiple times to gain power to gain power. Saiyans alway's take pride in there work and training.The needle like tail had dropped to his legs and stoped Donzle in his tracks cold, and actually caught him off gaurd enough to grab his legs again and lashing his body agianst the ground mutiple times Then after a series of palethic attacks, Donzle finally used the Ki blade to get himself free from the cluches of that mutant.. It had to be the mutant's tail which was giving power or balancing it just like a saiyan tail. With his tail cut in half, the mutant could control himself or his power level.Donzle thought this fight was over as the mutant couldn't even contrate long enough to throw an attack him then he realized the mutant had begun change back to his older form in which he wouldn't be strong enough to kill Donzle however, he could still dish out damage to his foe. The last time Donzle checked, he could steel pain so this....this was going to be yet another fight on his hands. This mutant was still some kind of freak, even compared to cell however that wasn't the main focus for now. At this point it only mattered that Donzle kills it and gets the job done.


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Post by Donzle on 7/16/2012, 11:37 pm

still working on it
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Pop us a comment below to let us know when it is completed and we'll get you added.
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Post by Donzle on 7/19/2012, 9:51 pm

Finished finally. Sorry if stuff incorrect, I type too fast.

Since when did Chi Chi get so cute? lol
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Careful, Chi Chi is a married woman

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