Ace Thunderfist

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Ace Thunderfist

Post by Ace on 8/31/2012, 12:55 am

Character Name: Ace Thunderfist

Age 22

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Appearance (Picture Recommended:)

Starting Location: Earth

Biography (150 words:)
Ace is the son of Albert and Alexandra Thunderfist, and the twin brother of Angela. Their parents shared the same first letters in their names so they figured, why not? As Thunderfists they were destined to be defenders of their people, and as soon as they were able to walk their training would begin. The most common hand to hand combat style taught amongst Thunderfist disciples is Shaolin Quan. Originally the Thunderfists had their own hand to hand style but when some wandering monks caught sight of it they thought they'd take it up on themselves to correct their pitiful style and teach them their Shaolin ways of fighting.

Ace and Angela endured fifteen years of grueling training such as standing in the horse stance for hours on end with a horse food bag resting on each of their shoulders. As the years went by the horse feed bags went from two to four, then from four to six. They lived, breathed, and ate their training. (So to speak.) Their daily routine consisted of break feast, training, studying, lunch, training, studying, dinner, training, studying, and finally sleep. This continued for fifteen years.

The Thunderfist Temple had enjoyed many decades of peace ever since the warring ages had ended, but this did not stop them from continuing their ancient ways. No one could predict rather or not another warring age would begin or not. Their wise choices would prove to be helpful. One day during a training session the Red Ribbon Army invaded the temple. The Thunderfists put up a great fight, but their numbers were few and the Red Ribbons were armed. All but a hand full met their end by the heartless soldiers.

Although beaten and wounded, Albert would rather die than see his beloved family be taken from him, and in a last stand he called out their mighty General. Knowing he couldn't beat their General by normal means, Albert summoned up every last bit of his strength and with five claps of his hand, the Thunderfist ]hero lunged at General arm stretched out, and pierced right through his heart. Albert looked back at his family, his daughter, his wife, and his son and gave them one last smile before burning away into ash.

The soldiers were upset over the loss of their General and in a rampage they murdered Alexandra and many more Thunderfists, leaving the temple littered with corpses, and blood staining the once white tiled floors. Left for dead Ace woke up a few days later, his sister missing and his mother and father's corpse stacked on top of him, the determined Thunderfist crawled out from the pile of corpses and nursed his wounds.

Although still in poor condition, Ace grievously buried his fellow Thunderfists and his parents. The stench of death churned his stomach. His stomach could hardly handle the grotesque images that he saw. When all were buried he paid his final respects and swore revenge up on the Red Ribbon Army.

Many years had past since then and the boy had become a man, and during a routine trip to the city Ace overheard a group of Red Ribbon Soldiers conversing about a woman who had a strange control over electricity. There was no mistaking it. His sister was alive and from his understanding she was being held captive by the Red Ribbons and from that point he cooked up a plan. He'd have to infiltrate the Red Ribbon ranks in order to rescue his sister. It wasn't difficult for Ace to impress his superiors as a soldier, let alone his General as a Captain. In six short months Ace had went from a nameless grunt to a General and with each passing day he grew closer and closer to finding his sister.


You start with 50 as a base for each attribute and have 200 attribute points (AP) you may distribute amongst them.

Strength: 75
Agility: 125
Ki: 100
Endurance: 100

You start with 50 technique points (TP). What abilities will you start with?
After Image
Your character disappears leaving behind an after image of themselves where they once were. After Image increases your agility attribute by +75% for one action, to aid in evading an attack or launching a surprise strike.
Attack Rating: None
Actions: Augment
FP Gain: +15
Prerequisites: None
Learning: 50 TP

How did you find this site? I was referred.

Were you referred to this site, if so, who referred you? Ava, but she is banned.

Roleplay Sample (250 words):
The wind howled loudly as it blew immensely past Ace as he stared idly down at a freshly dug grave. A wooden plank with engravings substituted as a gravestone. The youthful male clenched his fist as tears streamed down his cheeks. "I'll get him for this, Naomi." he said in a shaky voice. "I'll make him pay. I'll make -all- of them pay."

Ace turned around and gazed off into the sea of buildings in West City. His blue hues narrowed as he slipped on a red hoody. "Remember when you got me this hoody?" he asked with a smile. "I refused to wear it because it was red." He pocketed his hands inside the hoody. It was a little smaller than he was use to. He wore it unzipped. A tribal tattoo visible on his exposed chest. "I decided to wear it after all." With that said he walked away from the grave and headed back to the city.

He had quite a bit of money left over from his job as a General for the Red Ribbon Army. They paid very handsomely. He checked into a local hotel but instead of getting the best room possible he decided to go with something a little more cheap and subtle. He wasn't making any more money any time soon so he would have to make every zenni last.

For the following week he nursed his own wounds with medicines he picked up at the local pharmacy. He even stitched his wounds himself with a sterilized needle and thread. Although painful it was nothing he couldn't endure. After surviving two gunshot wounds he felt like he could take on anything.

Even wounded Ace didn't falter in his training exercises. He consistently worked out his body even at the cost of his wounds reopening a couple of times, but despite all that after a few days the wounds healed up almost completely. It would likely take a couple more weeks in order for the skin and bruised ribs to completely heal up. At least for his case. Ace was determined to get better as quickly as possible. The sooner he was one hundred percent the sooner he could act his revenge on the Red Ribbon Army.

During his routine walk to the drug store Ace stopped in front of a gift shop and gazed through a window at the strange gifts the store had in stock. Balloons, flowers, cards, etc. His thoughts started to drift onto the fighters he had fought a week ago. It's likely that group of fighters are hospitalized after that ordeal... at least the girl anyway. Maybe I should get her a get well gift and stop by. He snorted at his own thought in dismissal. Gifts weren't his style. And giving a gift to some girl he just hospitalized doesn't seem like the best thing to do. Tch... who cares if those idiots hold a grudge against me or not. I sure don't.


Ace strolled down the hospital hallway his blue hues searching the door numbers for Priere's. Why am I here? I just told myself I didn't care what these idiots thought of me. As he arrived in the doorway the blond ex-Ribbon noticed Jax and the other individual who had rescued the girl a week ago in the room with Priere. Ace pulled back and hid outside the doorway, his back to the wall. Ugh... I didn't expect all three of them to be here. And why am I hiding? I don't have anything to be afraid of. Right?

Ace listened in. Had they seen him? And if not this would be the best opportunity for him to listen for a chance to make his appearance... if he was going to make one at all that is.

Posts : 24
Join date : 2012-01-26

Character Info
Level: 1
Race: Human
Location: Earth

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Re: Ace Thunderfist

Post by Goku on 8/31/2012, 10:24 am

Welcome back Ace!

You're added once again.


No light, no light in your bright blue eyes
I never knew daylight could be so violent
A revelation in the light of day
You can't choose what stays and what fades away


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Join date : 2011-12-10
Age : 30
Location : New York

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Level: 81
Race: Saiyan
Location: Other World

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