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Post by Broly on 10/3/2012, 12:13 am

Well, important to me. I'd like you all to place a vote on this topic; namely, who won, and why. Votes without reason, on request of the challenger (Yamcha) will not be counted. This was originally going to be 9 posts from each of us, but I decided to cut it short simply to get it done with (as my life has been hectic as of late), and given him the post-count advantage (as you have seen less of him than you have of me). If you have the time, please reply here with your reason and vote.
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Post by Gaza on 10/3/2012, 5:29 pm

Now, if i may be critical, I'd have to give it to Broly.

Yamcha, although your writing was fairly decent, you structure was choppy, your dialogue was just entirely separate and somewhat irritated me. Although I found your Yamcha both quite accurate and a bit enjoyable.... Broly, AKA Duke, brought his usual self in this thread. Well structured, an easy read, and kept me wanting more. Yamcha, I do look forward to seeing more from you, but my vote goes to Duke.
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Post by Goku on 10/3/2012, 5:38 pm

Both writers need improvement.

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