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Custum Character Aku

Post by Aku on 2/2/2012, 2:59 am

Character Name: Aku

Age: 30

Gender: Male

Race: Saiyan

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Starting Location: Vegeta

Attributes:

Strength: 115
Agility: 105
Ki: 100
Endurance: 100

You start with 50 technique points (TP). What abilities will you start with?
Masenko

Were you referred to this site, if so, who referred you? DBZroleplay group on DA

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Background (150 words:)
Aku was born the same day as Goku and Broly too. Before Planet Vegeta was destroy by Freiza his Older brother Harou got him and both of them escape. They crashed landed on Planet Kanassa where Bardock squad was killed Dodoria. Four Years has past since they escape Planet Vegeta Fate, Harou and Aku have been training to get better. But One day they meet a saiyan named Vegito. Vegito trained them for another 12 years until he left and told them that their journey will continue without him. For years Aku and Harou went around the galaxy looking for saiyans and beings to join him to create army. Once his army was complete he went around the universe conquering planets. On a planet in the North Galaxy Harou, Aku, Dokru and Zancorus meet a group of henchmen from the Planet Trade Organization leaded by Lord Arctic one of King Cold Son. Aku and Dokru and Zancorus defeated Arctic Army with easy. Harou and Arctic began to fight it was a long and feircy battle. But Harou got the upper hand He knock him to the ground, hewould destroy him but deciside to let him join his army and Arctic did. Harou later meet a wizard named Babidi, at first Babidi try to control him but it didn't work. Then he send his warriors Yakon and Pui Pui to fight himbut Harou knock them out easy. Then He walk to him grab him and force him the teach him all the spells he know. But as Aku watches in Horror as his brother gets corrupt. He descide to take his wife, son and Jiro friend Suika and left to Planet Jisko. There they live for eight years. Aku sense his brother will and descide to go to earth. Aku he heard about a warrior named Goku who live on earth. So Aku, Eiko, Jiro, Suika and Jiro Teacher Nakuro left to planet earth to warn Goku and help him against his brother.

Roleplay Sample (250 words:)
Aku landed on planet earth to search for the one they called Goku. He flys to west city to find the Z Fighters and ask for their help. Once their Aku meet a little man called Krillin. Aku asked "Hey do you know of a warrior named Goku". Krillin replieds " Ya why do you want to know". Aku said "I have some bad news I need to tell him it deals with your planet Earth".

Krillin faced turn balck and replied "We have no time to waist come on". Than Krillin and Aku flew at high speed to Kami lookout. Once they arrive there stood the universe's greatest warrior Goku and his friends the Z Fighters.

Aku told goku in a soft voice "Goku your planets is in grave danger".

Goku got a serious face and said "What the problem".

Aku replied "in three days your planet is going to get attack by A army leaded by a saiyan named Harou and he coming to conquer this world and kill you."


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Re: Custum Character Aku

Post by Goku on 2/2/2012, 3:03 am

Masuka Gun isn't an ability. You can make custom abilities, but you can't start with them.

Here are the available abilities.

http://www.infinitedbz.com/h7-attack1

http://www.infinitedbz.com/h5-special

Your roleplay is a little crowded. You should start a new paragraph for each person that speaks. Also, keep in mind that you can't roleplay canon characters. For example, we have a Goku, so you can't include him in your RPs without permission.

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Post by Aku on 2/2/2012, 3:15 am

Ok i will fix the paragraoh but He not a canon character he is Original. What this video : http://youtu.be/B_rZeWyfQvk
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Post by Goku on 2/2/2012, 3:21 am

I understand. I was just letting you know for the future that you can't use canon characters in your RPs.

You still gotta find a non-custom technique for starting off.

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Post by Aku on 2/2/2012, 10:51 pm

ok so can you help me fix my Roleplaying sample
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Re: Custum Character Aku

Post by Goku on 2/3/2012, 12:03 am

Super Masenko costs 75 TP and you need to know Masenko first. You only start with 50 TP. You'll have to choose an ability that costs 50 TP or less.

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Post by Aku on 2/3/2012, 1:28 am

ok so how do you upgrade on Abilities
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Post by Goku on 2/3/2012, 1:35 am

As you write RPS, you will level up. Each time you level up, youl gain TP. Eventually, you'll get enough to raise Masenko to Rank III and then learn Super Masenko.

As for you RP, I think you could add some more detail. But mostly, it's a wall of text. Each time someone new speaks, you should start a new paragraph. If you break it up a bit, it won't look so crowded and be easier to read.

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Post by Aku on 2/3/2012, 1:37 am

what rps
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Post by Aku on 2/3/2012, 1:38 am

and what does TP means
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Post by Izon on 2/3/2012, 1:43 am

This site focuses on writing roleplays either alone, or with groups. This is a writers community and it's how your character gains levels. (Read through the rules).

TP is technique points. They are what you use to learn new moves or upgrade current ones.

It doesn't sound like you've read through the site. We are open to answer questions, but you should read the site.
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Post by Aku on 2/3/2012, 2:22 am

ok but even in the rules it doesnt say how you can roleplay in a group
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Post by Izon on 2/3/2012, 2:32 am

you roleplay in groups how you would on your own, except you take turns to post replies, working with one another to make a story.

If you are making the first post of the roleplay it is your job to get the exposition out of the way. Be sure to introduce the storyline, any NPCs and everything someone would need to know to bring their character in. Joining in another person's thread can be a bit tricky. Make sure introduce your character but not take over the story. It would be best to brainstorm with the thread's starter on how to incorporate your character smoothly.

You just simply take turns writing what your character says or do. Read over this http://www.infinitedbz.com/t50-revelations-shana-trunks-sayuri
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Post by Aku on 2/3/2012, 2:55 am

ok
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Re: Custum Character Aku

Post by Goku on 2/4/2012, 3:39 am

So, Aku, I started to add your character, but realized I can't yet. Your starting attributes only add up to 345. You are missing 55 points.

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Post by Aku on 2/4/2012, 8:34 pm

ok i just edit it
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