Janemba - Demon

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Janemba - Demon

Post by OldJanemba on 3/3/2012, 12:22 am

Character Name:

Janemba

Starting Location:

Planet Arlia

Attributes:

You start with 50 as a base for each attribute and have 200 attribute points (AP) you may distribute amongst them.

Strength: 100
Agility: 170
Ki: 50
Endurance: 80

You start with 50 technique points (TP). What abilities will you start with?

Flaming Aura

Utility
Your body becomes wreathed in fiery ki as you pull summon forth powers within to launch a deadly attack or to flee from harm. Increases your strength and agility attributes by +25% for one action.
Attack Rating: None
Actions: Augment
FP Gain: +15
Prerequisites: None
Learning: 50 TP

Were you referred to this site, if so, who referred you?

No

Please post a link to your wiki username/profile:

http://infinitedbz.wetpaint.com/account/LSSJBeserk

Roleplay Sample (250 words):

"Alright! EVERYONE'S HANDS IN THE AIR WHILE WE SEARCH YOU FOR ANYTHING SUSPICIOUS! ANYONE MOVES, THEY GET SHOT!!"

The black leather clad robber nervously pivoted on his feet, careful to make sure noone was making any sudden moves. They were gonna make a pretty penny off this job, and knew that nobody was stupid enough to try and stand up to what they were doing. So far it was going well and the teller was sweating bullets trying to get all the money into the bag.

"James..JAMES!! THERE'S A ROBBERY DOWN NEAR 53rd STREET!"

Officer James quickly woke from his nap, the cities crime rate was down and it was pretty boring for most of the officers, hearing of another robbery instantly got their blood boiling.

"Get in the Vic, I'll drive!"

He peeled out of the precinct parking garage, hoping to atleast see something extraordinary today. Speeding towards the bank it was evident that they weren't the only ones, evident from the twenty or so other cars all speeding towards their destination.

"Shit..SHIT MAN HURRY UP!"

He pressed the gun to the tellers head with exceptional pressure, intimidating him to move faster as the distant sirens quickly drew near, this was his 3rd strike and he was damned if he was gonna get caught by a bunch of two-bit wheeze-jobs. The demon turned his head as his keen super-senses picked up the distinct sound of police car sirens, a sign that potential fun could be had.

"Heh."

An almost distant roar could be heard as he quickly flew to were the commotion was, landing behind the supposed "protectors" that he could easily dispatch at anytime he pleased. But they were all too busy freaking out from seeing his large appearance and having to deal with the bank robbers, quickly shooting bullets at his body that merely crumpled upon impact like folded paper. A large grin came over his face as he held his hand in front of him, a whining sound pierced the policeman's ears before a pink orb appeared in his hand and suddenly hit a car, exploding upon contact.

The explosion also blew out the windows, freaking out the already on edge robbers who proceeded to drop what they were doing and start blindly shooting at the entrance.

"Ohhh, That tickles..."

He grabbed one of them by the collar, barely exerting himself to do so as the man sputtered and choked from the tightened grip around his neck.

"Wh..What the hell are you?!"

The demon merely smirked at his response and a gruff and otherwordly responded

"The end of all things.." before putting his red clawlike hands around the mans neck, squeezing harder and harder until he heard ligaments snap and saw the lifeless eyes roll into the back of his head. Janemba cackled a frightening, booming laugh that hurt the ears of the hostages around him. Summoning another pink orb he decided to play with the next one, who started shooting point-blank with a machine guns, the bullets ricocheting off his body plating and bouncing around the narrow room with reckless abandon.

Using his extremely superior speed, he suddenly reappeared behind the man and pushed him into the hostages before launching the pink orb of ki at them, causing a massive explosion and blowing out the wall and a few of the offices on the other side it in a spectacular fashion.



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Re: Janemba - Demon

Post by Goku on 3/3/2012, 12:47 am

I have a recommendation for your dialogue. Each time someone speaks start a new paragraph. It makes the story easier to follow.

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Re: Janemba - Demon

Post by OldJanemba on 3/5/2012, 1:18 pm

Note taken.
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Re: Janemba - Demon

Post by Goku on 3/5/2012, 1:56 pm

Looks better. Accepted.

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A revelation in the light of day
You can't choose what stays and what fades away

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