Drago Hydrax first claim
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Drago Hydrax first claim
Thread Name: To catch a sayain
Type: Solo
Link:http://www.infinitedbz.com/t1690-to-catch-a-sayain-solo
Link to Character Sheet:http://infinitedbz.wetpaint.com/page/Drago+Hydrax
Participants: Drago Hydrax
Word Count: 1598
Quest Rewards: Not a quest
Hero or Villain Points: None wanted
Benefits: Half Sayain so Inner Power but nothing really to do with the topic
Type: Solo
Link:http://www.infinitedbz.com/t1690-to-catch-a-sayain-solo
Link to Character Sheet:http://infinitedbz.wetpaint.com/page/Drago+Hydrax
Participants: Drago Hydrax
Word Count: 1598
Quest Rewards: Not a quest
Hero or Villain Points: None wanted
Benefits: Half Sayain so Inner Power but nothing really to do with the topic
Drago Hydrax- Fighter
- Posts : 51
Join date : 2012-07-20
Re: Drago Hydrax first claim
b]Thread Name:[/b] Half Breeds Everywhere
Type: Spar
Link:http://www.infinitedbz.com/t1684-half-breeds-everywhere-zanza-vs-drago#6708
Link to Character Sheet:http://infinitedbz.wetpaint.com/page/Drago+Hydrax
Participants: Drago Hydrax, Zanza
Word Count: mine:2033
Group:5150
Quest Rewards: Not a quest
Hero or Villain Points: None wanted
Benefits: Half Sayain so Inner Power, Normal Bonus
Type: Spar
Link:http://www.infinitedbz.com/t1684-half-breeds-everywhere-zanza-vs-drago#6708
Link to Character Sheet:http://infinitedbz.wetpaint.com/page/Drago+Hydrax
Participants: Drago Hydrax, Zanza
Word Count: mine:2033
Group:5150
Quest Rewards: Not a quest
Hero or Villain Points: None wanted
Benefits: Half Sayain so Inner Power, Normal Bonus
Drago Hydrax- Fighter
- Posts : 51
Join date : 2012-07-20
Re: Drago Hydrax first claim
b]Thread Name:[/b] Guardian of Earth
Type: Quest, Solo
Link: http://www.infinitedbz.com/t1707-guardian-of-the-earth-solo-easy-quest
Link to Character Sheet:http://infinitedbz.wetpaint.com/page/Drago+Hydrax
Participants: Drago Hydrax, Zanza
Word Count: 1502
Quest Rewards: 1000 zeni
Hero or Villain Points: None wanted
Benefits: Half Sayain so Inner Power once again nothing significant to the roleplay
Type: Quest, Solo
Link: http://www.infinitedbz.com/t1707-guardian-of-the-earth-solo-easy-quest
Link to Character Sheet:http://infinitedbz.wetpaint.com/page/Drago+Hydrax
Participants: Drago Hydrax, Zanza
Word Count: 1502
Quest Rewards: 1000 zeni
Hero or Villain Points: None wanted
Benefits: Half Sayain so Inner Power once again nothing significant to the roleplay
Drago Hydrax- Fighter
- Posts : 51
Join date : 2012-07-20
Re: Drago Hydrax first claim
Your RP's just barely meet expectations. Your actual writing is good, but your paragraphs are a bit too clunky and hard to read. Walls of text are not fun and engaging for your readers. I suggest spacing things out some more. I'd say it's best to go for 3 to 5 sentences in one paragraph. Also, every time someone speaks starting a new paragraph as well. Doing so will give your writing a good flow and make keep someone reading. I had to stop after a line or two.
Roleplay: +376 XP, +2,200 zeni, +2 Action Points
Spar: +225 XP, +1,150 zeni, +2 Action Points, and +1 Battle Merit.
Total: +601 XP, +3,350 zeni, +4 Action Points, and +1 Battle Merit.
Congratulations!
You've gained five levels (2 - 6.)
You currently have 1,000 AP and 125 TP to utilize.
Roleplay: +376 XP, +2,200 zeni, +2 Action Points
Spar: +225 XP, +1,150 zeni, +2 Action Points, and +1 Battle Merit.
Total: +601 XP, +3,350 zeni, +4 Action Points, and +1 Battle Merit.
Congratulations!
You've gained five levels (2 - 6.)
You currently have 1,000 AP and 125 TP to utilize.
Goku- Staff
- Posts : 1903
Join date : 2011-12-10
Age : 36
Location : New York
Character Info
Level: 81
Race: Saiyan
Location: Other World
Re: Drago Hydrax first claim
125tp
Sense -25tp
Afterimage- 50tp
Flash Bomb -50 tp
0tp left
new stats
Strength 300
Agility 390
Ki 450
Endurance 285
Sense -25tp
Afterimage- 50tp
Flash Bomb -50 tp
0tp left
new stats
Strength 300
Agility 390
Ki 450
Endurance 285
Drago Hydrax- Fighter
- Posts : 51
Join date : 2012-07-20
Re: Drago Hydrax first claim
This is completed.
Goku- Staff
- Posts : 1903
Join date : 2011-12-10
Age : 36
Location : New York
Character Info
Level: 81
Race: Saiyan
Location: Other World
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