the customcreation of dilletuce

Character Name: Dilletuce

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Race: Sayain

Hybrids Only - Primary and Secondary Race:

Appearance (Picture Recommended:) http://www.sixpacknow.com/Abs_of_the_Month/black_male_six_pack-abs.jpg skin tone and body figure. http://onlyhdwallpapers.com/wallpaper/suit_kuro_uji_sebastian_michaelis_red_eyes_anime_black_hair_desktop_1480x1406_wallpaper-125967.png but red instead and keep the eyes. he is6 foottall wearing http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-vMtlVl4Oqn4/TcvvDQlPh0I/AAAAAAAAB2c/DxCd6l4i2nk/s1600/Saiyan%2BChest%2BArmor%2BPapercraft.jpg and http://images.mylot.com/userImages/images/postphotos/2383085.jpg to finish it off.

Starting Location: Vegeta

Attributes:

You start with 50 as a base for each attribute and have 200 attribute points (AP) you may distribute amongst them.

Strength:50
Agility:50
Ki:50
Endurance:50

You start with 50 technique points (TP). What abilities will you start with?
Ice Wave



Stun
You bring your hands forward and unleash a torrent of frigid cold wind and ice, immobilizing your opponent for 2 actions. If your opponent's endurance is higher than your ki, they may break free after one action. May only use once per battle.
Attack Rating: 1 each action immobilized
Actions: 1
FP Gain: +20
Prerequisites: None
Learning: 50 TP
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Background (150 words:)Delletuce was born to protect vegeta from any invaders. At the age of 5 this small sayain was once told stories of frieza the tyrant who disappeared from thin air. So he from that day trained for the tyrant and any other vicious monster to travel to vegeta and test the might of the sayains again. Unlike his brethren that believed this story to be false he thought it the bare truth. By the age of20 he became elite due to his power level but not only was his power elite worthy. His pride was so great it could out do anyone of vegeta and rumors tell it that his pride could out do the king himself. Delletuce was known for challenging other sayains both in combat as well as their pride because He strongly believed any sayain with pride and honor is worth calling themselves such a name and with such he thought vegeta would be ready for anything that came their way,
Roleplay Sample (250 words:)
Dilletuce walked through the hallway sweating from his entice training session. He looked around seeing no one but himself as he slowly made a grin on his face thinking" well after each training session it is always good to test the other sayains on this wretched planet.” He gripped the towel on his body placing it behind his neck as he walked the halls slowly. The echoing of foot steps went through the long, well lit hallway as his thoughts continued “besides how else will they ever fend themselves against frieza.” He looked about at the exit as he emerged through the door.

The 6 foot tall dark skinned sayain took a look around the land he knew and loved to see sayains everywhere some brave and strong while others were weak and almost useless. He smirked as he had mischievous thoughts of testing a sayins pride. He slowly stepped within the middle of the city grinning as he does so as he then yells” do any of you dare call yourself that of the race of sayains. Step forward and say it proudly or do not reply at all.” His voice echoed the planet as he looked around fiercely for a brave new combatant to show him or herself.

Eventually Delletuce gotten a reply from somebody in the crowd that surrounded him with a puzzled yet fearful look int heir eyes as the voice seemed small but gathered yelling “we do!” For the moment he ignored the cowards around him as he walked to the children smiling as he states in a proud voice” but what if the mighty frieza returns and plans to wipe us all out one by one?”

The children had only smiled pounding their chests in an attempt to look tough as they say” then he will fall at the might of the sayains.” This banter could do nothing less than put a smile on his face as in hope for the future.

Welcome to Infinite Dbz! We need to work on your rp a bit. First off, break up your paragraphs so that it's not one giant wall of text.

Also, all those abilities you chose are on the combat page. You start knowing those, you don't have to unlock them. They don't cost TP.

http://www.infinitedbz.com/h7-attack1
http://www.infinitedbz.com/h5-special

These are what you choose from. Remember, you have only 50 TP.

there i fixed it

All right, looks good. I'll get you added.