Yamcha of the wolf fang stance

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Yamcha of the wolf fang stance

Post by Yamcha the banned on 1/29/2012, 7:54 pm

Character Name: Yamcha

Age:21

Gender:male

Race:human

Starting Location:earth

Attributes:

Strength:80
Agility:120
Ki: 100
Endurance:125

0 (TP) remaining.

Moves learned: Surging Fist

I wasn't refered, it was on google


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Roleplay Sample (250 words:) Sleeping in bed, Yamcha was resting in his house . The alarm clock went off and Tao awoke in a grump. He was dreaming about sexy girls in a music video that he stared in. The music from the alarm clock was Biggie Smalls, Get me the loot. Yamcha , now awake brushed off the covers and stood up. He put on his wolf bandit clothes that were similar to yamcha when he was first introduced in dragon ball and started punching the air as fast as he could, gathering strenght in his arms and unleashing the jin into fast shadowboxing like punches. He kept up a solid pace, still going strong as he contiuned to punch the air in his room. Afterwards, he got on the ground and started doing pushups with his hands close; his hands forming a diamond as he continued to work out. Today looked fruitful so he trained hard. The young martal artist then stopped training and went to the kitchen to eat. There were some steaks from last night he smelled. He then saw puar cooking the stakes on the stove. "Wow Yamcha, those steaks sure smell nice, i know you'd like one... This one's done!" puar said in a energetic tone, He then spots her puting the cooked steak on a plate, placing a fork and knife in an X ontop of the steak and handed it to yamcha who took it to the table and sat down to eat his mighty breakfast.


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Re: Yamcha of the wolf fang stance

Post by Goku on 1/29/2012, 7:56 pm

You need to sign up on infinitedbz.wetpaint.com, click on My Profile, copy the URL to your wiki username, and paste it on your join form.

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Re: Yamcha of the wolf fang stance

Post by dpriest on 1/29/2012, 10:22 pm

you start with 50 stat points on each stat then you add 200 to them

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Post by Goku on 1/30/2012, 1:53 am

Your starting stats are way too high. You start with 50 each and get 200 to split among each of the stats.

Your sample RP is only 150 words. Needs to be 250.

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Re: Yamcha of the wolf fang stance

Post by Goku on 1/30/2012, 6:23 pm

Looks like you fixed it. Accepted.

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