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ToRn's join form (Complete)

Post by Yusuke on 2/5/2012, 7:37 pm

Character Name: Yusuke

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Race: Human

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Starting Location: Earth

Attributes:

You start with 50 as a base for each attribute and have 200 attribute points (AP) you may distribute amongst them.

Strength: 100
Agility: 100
Ki: 100
Endurance: 100

You start with 50 technique points (TP). What abilities will you start with? Dodon Ray

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Background (150 words:)

Yusuke was born into a military family, raised for fighting by both his mother and father. From a young age, he'd been trained for good aim with guns via water gun fights and sling shots. As he'd grown older, his parents began drilling him, having him run laps around the yard and then block, hold certain yoga poses for a time...Mostly they tried to keep his body loose and fit at that age, but as he hit his preteens, the training became more intense.

For the next three years, he'd been taught a vast number of mixed martial arts techniques by his parents, and forced to eat healthier foods. It wasn't that bad for the first few months, but the weights got heavier every week, and the techniques and stances more complex with each passing day. At age thirteen, he was enrolled in a Karate school, which he remained in for a year. The Dojo didn't go off of belts, but instead gradually increased the seriousness of the training. When the year ended, he was moved into a Kung Fu school to promote his speed and blocking, which served well for the next and most recent Dojo he was entered in.

At age fifteen, Yusuke was enrolled in Master Shen's Crane-style Martial Arts School, in which he remained for the next year and a half. He was entered here due to Master Shen sitting in on a tournament the previous year, in which he'd selected Yusuke as a temporary student. At the time, his parents didn't know that Shen's school focused almost entirely on spiritual combat, and they only found out when Shen sent home a letter saying that Yusuke's Ki was progressing nicely. After that, it took Shen three long-winded letters to explain Ki wasn't witchcraft and that it was actually healthy.

In reality, Shen was trying to avoid letting his students surpass or match him...But when one proved that he really could use the Dodon Ray...well...




Roleplay Sample (250 words:)

"Master Shen...What's this weird light on my finger? It's...It's kind of tingly and warm...Um..." Yusuke blinked a few times, his eyes crossed at the blue energy dancing around his right index finger. It felt like the source of it was somewhere near his belly button, flowing up through his sternum and down his arm...But that was crazy talk. When Master Shen did magic like this, it just appeared on his finger. But then...He never had described it, and none of the students had really done it before. Or, rather, never done it in front of the class.

Shen's eyes almost popped out of his glasses, his body stiffening in what might have been fear. He regained his cool quickly, though, and pointed frantically at a dummy. Yusuke, a bit lost, turned towards it and aimed his finger forward. From there, he started guessing and assuming, using his memory of when Master Shen had done this. The Crane Hermit always pushed his thumb down, as if firing a gun, which unleashed a massive beam. Mimicking this as best he could, Yusuke imagined his hand as a gun, then in a swift motion, dropped his thumb flat onto his index finger, willing the blue energy around his hand forward as an explosive ray.

The beam struck the dummy, which sat half a room away, and tore into the chest a bit before exploding. For a moment, the Crane Dojo was consumed by light, which then died and was replaced by smoke. As the debris cleared, Master Shen was revealed to be panicking- in fact, he was whipping out a pink slip and jotting down what was presumably Yusuke's name. At the same time, the class was staring at Yusuke in awe. Yusuke himself, though, was staring at his hands in shock. After a moment, the pink slip was handed to him, along with the single duffle bag that held his clothes and some Manga.

"Well, your training here is done, congratulations, get out of here. Go on! SCOOT!"

Was Shen being a bit anxious? Yusuke frowned, scratching his head as he walked slowly towards the exit. From past experience, he knew not to question Shen about things right away...But he'd be back later. Besides, a bit of travel could lead to some good training.


Last edited by Yusuke on 2/6/2012, 6:25 pm; edited 3 times in total
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Re: ToRn's join form (Complete)

Post by Aqua on 2/5/2012, 8:08 pm

Work in progress considered.....
It is looking good so far, I see no problems.
Once you get the BG and RP sample all done I'll look it over and start adding you.
Just mark completed for me on the title so I know.
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Join date : 2012-01-02
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Location : New York

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Level: 22
Race: Human
Location: Earth

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